Analysis of Loving on sofas

Daniel Roy winch 1982 (Hemel Hempstead)



I want you to know,
That I'm better now,
Not living on sofas,
I made it somehow.

The world kept turning,
While I stood still,
I was still waiting,
For old wounds to heal.

And time went on,
I'm reluctantly here,
Still coughing up anxiety,
And feeling the fear.

But I want you to know,
I'm getting better everyday,
One step forward,
Is sometimes taken away.

And the world keeps turning,
That is a fact,
The memories I've lost,
I can never get back.


Scheme ABXB CXCX XXXX ADXD CXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 11111 11101 110110 1111 01110 1111 11110 11111 0111 101001 11010100 01001 111111 11010101 1110 1011001 001110 1101 010011 111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 465
Words 107
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Written on December 02, 2023

Submitted by danielwinch206 on March 05, 2023

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