Analysis of I Miss You Daddy



There are awesome people on earth,
The  greatest  I know by my birth,
Daddy, it is you  my hero.
Without you, feel me a  zero.
Smiled warmly when saw me sleeping,
Wiped my tears when I was weeping.
Hugged me if I did something wrong.
Dad, your kiss ever made me strong.
Sudden memory of your smile,
Makes my day exceedingly bright.
"I will never ever be around",
Said to me whenever I drown.
And yes, too early it was happened.
You left this world then I awakened.
This world is not bed of roses.
I found you true when got bruises.
But your lessons paved the path for me.
Lit up my life like Christmas tree.
The Death did not take you away,
But has brought us close day by day.


Scheme AABBCCDDEFGHIIJKLLMM
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11101011 01011111 10111110 01111010 11011110 11111110 11111101 11110111 10100111 11101001 111010101 11101011 011101110 111111010 11111110 11111110 111010111 11111101 01111101 11111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 677
Words 151
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 516
Words per stanza (avg) 136

About this poem

I wrote this poem five years after the death of my father. It was the moment when I was missing him so much. The poem expresses the feelings of a daughter that, without her father, she feels as if she is lost between a crowd.

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Written on March 04, 2017

Submitted by dmyfamilystat on March 03, 2023

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