Analysis of Hold on
Look out the window
You see a widow
Look at the your scares
You see a star
Look at body
Nothing but a failure
Forgiving the grief
Or listening to the thief
The theif has taken your words
Or the words have be misplaced
Like a pair of glasses
On the window
You hang down low
As you look at the calories
Oh crisis it more than you should of had
Looked at the scale oh I’m over by 10 pounds
the next week you stave so you don’t look like a clown
You see your flab’s
Like a slab
Tomorrow came and you thought again
Why if this a fight
When it could just be the game
Scheme | AA BX XXCCXXXA AXXXXBX XXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11010 11010 11011 1101 1110 101010 01001 1100101 0111011 1011101 101110 1010 1111 11110100 1101111111 1101111011 011111111101 1111 101 01101101 11101 1111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 588 |
Words | 138 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 8, 7, 3 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 88 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 24 |
About this poem
It about how mental health effected me
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