Analysis of A FRESH BREEZE



A fresh breeze you bring to me,
You understand when I sneeze,
You ignite endless hope in me,
Your actions and reactions lead me into self discovery,
I have a fresh knowledge poured into my heart ;

A fresh breeze you bring to me,
You understand when I sneeze,
Your presence allows me to remove junk off my chest,
You enlighten me with what birth mental sharpness,
I have a fresh acceptance of who I am;

A fresh breeze you bring to me,
You understand when I sneeze,
Your advice removes and repels numerous lies off my path,
You encourage me to love what is true and just,
I now hold firm to what awakens genuineness ;

A fresh breeze you bring to me,
You help me see possibilities,
I march and I overcome  impossibilities,
You have become an architecture of my confidence,
A perfect illustration of the sort of people our world precisely needs;

A fresh breeze you bring to me,
You direct me into believing in greatness,
I look forward to living life to the fullest,
You daily come with the ingredients which create a recipe for success,
All you are is immeasurable to me;

A fresh brings you bring to me,
You remove bad odour off my life,
I can now differentiate between what is good and bad,
Your participation in my life is observable great,
A powered life is through the great truths generated in it;

A fresh breeze you bring to me,
You add color into my life story,
In this I know my journey is not a fluke,
You are that phenomenal figure carrying me through,
A tangible confidence builder;

A fresh breeze you bring to me,
You have helped me score success in life,
In the midst of life, you revitalize my going,
Your being here is truly a fresh breeze,
A fresh breeze you bring to me!


Scheme ABaax ABxcx ABxdx Abbxx Acdxa aexxx Aaxxx AexbA
Poetic Form
Metre 0111111 101111 10110101 1100010110110100 11011010111 0111111 101111 1100111011111 101011111010 11010101111 0111111 101111 101010011001111 101011111101 1111110101000 0111111 11110100 1101101 1101110011100 0010101011101010101 0111111 101101010010 111011011010 11011001001010100101 1111010011 0111111 10111111 1110100111101 10010011101001 01011101110001 0111111 1110011110 01111101101 11101001010011 010010010 0111111 111110101 001111010110 1101110011 0111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,728
Words 359
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 166
Words per stanza (avg) 40

About this poem

This poem is about the best that one brings out into another through their participation in their lives.

Font size:
 

Written on March 18, 2023

Submitted by Creativity on March 18, 2023

1:47 min read
1

Ndu Ncube

I am a writer who is a poet who love truth hence when I write, it is all about creativity and not destruction. more…

All Ndu Ncube poems | Ndu Ncube Books

0 fans

Discuss this Ndu Ncube poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "A FRESH BREEZE" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 13 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/155838/a-fresh-breeze>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    18
    days
    16
    hours
    1
    minute

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    "I celebrate myself, and sing myself."
    A William Wordsworth
    B Walt Whitman
    C Countee Cullen
    D Billy Collins