Analysis of Story of mine



The day when sun was too bright to be
 Around me only dried air to breathe
In sky there were no kite's to see
not a story of weather, but a story of me

Time elapsed, then evening came
Sun also gone, now whom shall I blame
Just feeling  , how refrain myself
To Saggregate the shadow,of dausing flame

Then night portrayed another play
Tiny blinkies above the head , stray
And tempting Silvered coin in the pocket of sky
Just Snatched away the story of mine.


Scheme AXAA BBXB CCXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 011111111 011101111 01101111 1010110101011 1011101 110111111 1101011 110111 11010101 10101011 01011001011 110101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 460
Words 89
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

Poem reflects the emotional conditions in the robes of different events that poet feels.

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Written on April 06, 2023

Submitted by manoj20090302510 on April 06, 2023

Modified on April 08, 2023

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