Analysis of swinging in a park



Swinging in the park, a simple joy untold
For children young and old
With a creak and a groan, the swings come alive
A playground for all to thrive

The little ones giggling with glee
As they pump their legs, so carefree
They soar through the sky, their laughter ringing clear
The swings a playground of cheer

The teenagers, with a hint of rebellion
Pushing the swings to their full potential
Feeling the wind in their hair, as they defy gravity
A playground for teenage levity

The adults, a sense of nostalgia
As they swing back and forth in a slow sway
Memories flood back of days gone by
The swings a trip down memory lane

The park swings, a unifying force
For all ages, a joyous recourse
A playground of laughter, a place to play
A simple pleasure, here to stay


Scheme AABB CCDD XXCC XEXX FFEE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 10001010101 110101 10100101101 011111 010110011 1111111 11101110101 010111 0101011010 1001111010 10010111101100 0111100 001011010 1111010011 100111111 010111001 01101001 111001010 011100111 01010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 768
Words 146
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

the poem is about swings in park, and how they can be enjoyed by everyone from children to teenagers to adults.

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Written on January 14, 2023

Submitted by dakshbehl07 on March 29, 2023

Modified on April 01, 2023

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