Analysis of Lost poems
I feel at peace
among the thick woods,
tall swirling ferns,
the bird’s songs,
and the humming creeks.
Here in the secret of the forest
I pinch myself to see
if I am a human
and then I hear myself
humming an old pastoral song
over and over again.
The birds are wheeling
all around the sky
and away from the stream;
a cuckoo’s song
cracks the stagnant air.
I look out through the window
between the two tree trunks
and stretch my wobbly hands
towards the setting Sun.
My petite fingers touch nothing,
nothing at all, a faint red ball
in the distance remains
just beyond my feeble grasp
and reminds me
of the poems
I’d lost in the
desolate gorges
of the Himalayas
years ago.
Scheme | ABCDEFGHIJKLMNJOPQRHLSTUGVWXYP |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (30%) Etheree (27%) |
Metre | 1111 01011 1101 011 00101 100101010 11111 111010 01111 10111001 1001001 01110 10101 001101 0101 10101 1111010 010111 0111001 010101 10110110 10110111 001001 1011101 0011 1010 1100 10010 10010 101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 689 |
Words | 143 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 30 |
Lines Amount | 30 |
Letters per line (avg) | 18 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 531 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 127 |
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Written on May 06, 2022
Submitted by bhuwan.thapaliya on March 29, 2023
Modified on April 18, 2023
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