Analysis of Lord willing. That tiresome phrase.



Pastor stood up there

Looked straight ahead to them

Said to them.

'I stand here only by God's mercy

His protection  provision.

Wisdom and solace.

Second and third

And however many chances.

Stabilizing Hand in storms.

Had a bundle of them, Guys.

Always LORD WILLING

For the next day.

I sat about half way back

Sighing, grimacing, doubting.

BUT the very next day

Had one hellish batch

Of horrible events and attacks.

Motorcycle wiped out in the rain

Tipped over and crunched leg against

Limped to nearby farmhouse.

Big dog territorial

And wanting to rip and tear.

Farmer hardly gave a care.

Called for highway patrolman.

Bike impounded, and subject to fees.

Taken to County Hospital.

Long, long wait for Emerg Routine.

Life can get like that.

Started showing up at Church.

Singing Pastor's Tune now.


Scheme A B B X X X X X X X C D X C D X X X X X E A A X X E X X X X
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10111 110111 111 111101110 1010010 10010 1001 0101010 100101 1010111 1110 1011 1101111 1010010 101011 11101 110001001 10011001 11001101 11111 110100 0101101 1010101 11101 101000111 1011010 1111101 11111 1010111 101011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 875
Words 200
Sentences 22
Stanzas 30
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 21
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Written on March 25, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 25, 2023

Modified on March 25, 2023

1:00 min read
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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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