Analysis of Flawed

Emma Oglesby 2006 (Missouri)



My flaws are immense
and I'm a bit dense
My thoughts don't make sense
and I'm always tense

I'm in a loop
Jumping through hoops
I wanna get loose
and put down the noose

Can I let go?
or go with the flow?
I just don't know
If I can reap what I sow


Scheme AAAA XXBB CCCX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 11101 01011 11111 0111 1001 1011 11011 01101 1111 11101 1111 1111111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 250
Words 61
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

I wrote this poem in the midst of class at a time when I was just mad at the world. Writing this really helped me be able to come out of the phase and begin to be better.

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Written on March 15, 2023

Submitted by oglesbyemma4 on March 23, 2023

Modified on March 29, 2023

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