Analysis of You open my heart



You are my friend and brother
Though your expression a mystery
You walk a path beside me
With your moonlit energy
I feel your pulsing love
It emits from every pore
You are an angel pure
A certain you are sure
In the good you mirror to me
Your essence radiates
In music heavenly
That you are here on earth to stay
No matter how far away
I'm gladdened by your wishes
Of our security each day
Beloved brother thou
Are filled with dignity
And I love you
With a love so pure
It fills the world for thee
A love filtered
through the atmosphere
A tender caring mystery
For all the purposeful things I sought
Intentions you have surely brought
Your message so magnificent
Each of luck and light you taught
A gift, no, an awakening
That God is here tonight
I saw you in my dream
In my days one day I might
But I could wait and never
Loose your image of child-like joy
Filling my forever
Like the very first ahoy
As I sail through your perfect world
Your adornment is brought to life
In carousel of beauty
And majesty of right
I wish you love eternal
As you open your arms
To humanity's greatest plight


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111010 110100100 1101011 111100 111101 10111001 111101 010111 00111011 11010 010100 11111111 1101101 111110 110010011 01101 111100 0111 10111 110111 0110 1010 01010100 110100111 01011101 11010100 1110111 01110100 111101 111011 0111111 1111010 11101111 101010 1010101 11111011 10101111 010110 010011 1111010 111011 10100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,093
Words 212
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 42
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 877
Words per stanza (avg) 210
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Written on March 09, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on March 09, 2023

Modified by heathert.34240 on March 09, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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