Analysis of उसके सिवा किसी और पे मरता नहीं



ऐसा नहीं है की में उसे हर वक़्त याद करता नहीं,
एक वो है, जिसे मेरे आने-ना आने से फ़र्क़ पड़ता नहीं |

यूं तो लाखों तैयार है मेरे इश्क़ में रंग जाने के लिए,
एक वो है, जिसे मेरे इश्क़ का रंग चढ़ता नहीं |

मेरी तमाम कोशिशें दिख रही है ईस ज़माने को,
एक वो है, जो मेरी ये सब हरकतें पढता नहीं |

होंश खोके भी उसे देखनेमें मशग़ूल हो गया हूँ,
एक वो है, जो मेरी ओर आँखे करके तकता नहीं |

एक वो है, जो मुझे नज़र अंदाज़ किये जा रहे हैं,
एक में हूँ, जो उसके सिवा किसी और पे मरता नहीं |

चाहे कितना भी इंतज़ार क्यों न करना पड़े अब,
उन्हें बतलाओ की "कुलदीप" ऐसे थकता नहीं |


Scheme
Poetic Form
Metre 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
Characters 1,352
Words 140
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 0
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 0
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

I wrote this gazal in Hindi language, this kind of one sided lover’s feeling , who can do anything for their love , but the other one is not interested at all , he/she is not noticing the efforts of this person , but still this one sided lover is ready to do everything for their love.

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Written on December 13, 2022

Submitted by Kuldipgohel on February 26, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Kuldip Gohel

My self kuldip gohel , I’m from Gujarat state , which in india , currently I’m doing my bachelors in Ahmedabad , I’m writing since 3 years , and just 2 days ago I completed my own 85 creation , may be next year I’m going to publish my book , I am not writing my gazal with proper grammar, but still it’s look like gazal , I’m rhyming all words with grammar. more…

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