Analysis of Why did you do it?

Sam conway 1991 (New Zealand)



Why did you do it?
I'll never know
You don't admit it,
And that hurts the most.

You took every peice of me including my soul.
I feel so empty, with no where to go.
This pain i feel didn't happen over night.
It slowly crepped up on me over time.

I tried to bottle it all away
But one day it exploded in my face.
The flash backs started.
The depression kicked in.
The emptiness I feel it makes me want to scream.

I want to go back to who I was before
I lost myself.

You get to walk away but I never did
Now I'm forever haunted
Because of the one night
That changed my life forever .


Scheme ABAX XBCX XXDXX XX XDCX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1101 11011 01101 1110011101011 1111011111 11111010101 1101111101 111101101 1111010011 01110 001010 010011111111 11111111101 111 11110111101 1101010 011011 1111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 585
Words 137
Sentences 12
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 2, 4
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

This poem comes from the darkest day of my life .

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Submitted by samanthaconway589 on February 27, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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