Analysis of Think my baby loves me ( version 2)
Brandon fordosi 1984 (Cleveland,ohio)
I think, my baby, loves me.
Not sure, what to say.
way she, lookin at me.
Tellin me, she wanna to stay.
I think, it’s a, tale to tell.
Even for today.
Tellin me ,somebody
Wanna stay.
There’s some spots, that I, need to see.
There’s some things, I need to know.
Creepin, in the darkness.
Are the things, she gonna show.
Way, back yonder.
She gonna, scream and moan.
Candles, all around ya.
And no where, else, to go.
I think, my baby, loves me.
Not sure, what to say.
Way she, lookin at me.
Tellin me, she wanna stay.
I think, it’s a , tale to tell.
Watch, everything, they say.
Listen closely, honey.
I won’t, make a mistake.
There’s some places, that I, need to go.
There’s some things, I need to see.
Comin into the light, now Babah.
Is the king.
Way, back yonder.
She gonna, scream and moan.
Candles, all around ya.
And no where, Else, to call home.
Now babah, there’s some things
I need to see.
Into the light, now honey.
On , your, knee’s.
Way, back yonder, she gonna scream.
I think, my baby, loves me.
Not sure, what to say.
Way she, lookin at me.
Tellin me, she wanna stay.
No need ,to go, honey
It’s already, been taken away.
No need ,to worry, baby.
Cause, nothin’s , gonna be the same.
Tellin me, she wanna stay.
Yeah, way she look at me.
I think, my baby, loves me.
Not sure, what to say.
Scheme | ABAb cbab adxd EFGd ABAB cbax daxx EFGx xaaxx ABAB abaxBaAB |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111011 11111 11111 1111011 1110111 10101 1110 101 11111111 1111111 10010 1011101 1110 110101 101011 011111 1111011 11111 11111 111101 1110111 11011 101010 111001 111011111 1111111 1010111 101 1110 110101 101011 0111111 11111 1111 0101110 111 11101101 1111011 11111 11111 111101 111110 101011001 1111010 1110101 111101 111111 1111011 11111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,373 |
Words | 307 |
Sentences | 46 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 4, 8 |
Lines Amount | 49 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 85 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
About this poem
It’s dark as space outside, you’re in 1920’s Louisiana in the southern Bayou area.. and there’s trouble in the night.. and you’re not sure what to make of it..
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Written on September 29, 2022
Submitted by Brandon.fordosi on February 07, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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