Analysis of Save Me



Would you save me if you knew
The awful things I had to do
Would you save me if you saw
The side of me that was so flawed

If you saved me, if you did
After all the wrongs I hid
Would you regret saving me
If you saw what I had seen

If I were you I wouldn’t help
Knowing the things that I had felt
Leave me here to be alone
With the past I’ll never show


Scheme AAXX BBXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 01011111 1111111 01111111 1111111 1010111 1101101 1111111 1101111 10011111 1111101 1011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 364
Words 88
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

This poem is about the past I wish I didn’t have. I won’t say what happened, but I lost ages 9-14 of my childhood. There’s so much I wish I could take back.

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Written on February 03, 2023

Submitted by starforcemuni on February 04, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Danica Schwartz

My name is Danica. I’m 16 years old. Most of my poems are about my life or past. I know most people wouldn’t expect someone my age to feel like this, but I do. more…

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