Analysis of I wish ,I could!



I wish , I could sit beside
the rhythmic sea wave
trying and convincing me to
sing more along with it.

I wish ,I could walk
in midnight ,in rainy season
feeling the every drop of rain
washing off, all my
pain in one go.

I wish, I could sit beside
the silent mountain
trying to be its good companion
for a while in journey.

I wish , I could dive
deep beneath the sea
discovering and admiring
all beautiful creatures
which is yet to be discovered.

I wish, I could loose myself in woods
which is dark , scary and creepy
so that I can enthrall paramount
strength for my soul!
I wish , I could do all of these in my life❤️
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Scheme AXXX XBXXX ABBC XCXDX XCXXXD
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 01011 10001011 110111 11111 0101010 100100111 10111 1011 1111101 01010 101111010 101010 11111 10101 01000010 110010 11111010 11111101 11110010 1111110 1111 11111111011 10111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 664
Words 141
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 5, 6
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

This is poem about a girl who wants to try every possibility in her life but something is there which is constantly preventing her from doing all..So she is trying to express her feeling through this poem!

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Written on February 20, 2023

Submitted by Kswati8674 on February 20, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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