Analysis of dear me



Dear : me

I know I wasn’t there for you
The pact we made to keep your smile
I’ve disappointed you and
In the process I’ve broken your heart
Distracted by my obsession And
Against you I’ve committed indiscretion

Your forgiveness is what I seek
With your untainted soul   you’re unique
I’ve left a piece of you in that corner
Now I’ve come to redeem my honor

I hope you still believe in me
The girl we used to be
Our eccentric vision flaming
All our passion
I solemnly vow from now on I’ll love you & you’ll be my only obsession


Scheme A XXBXBC DDEE AAXCC
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1111111 01111111 101010 00111011 010110100 0111010010 10101111 110101101 1101110110 111101110 11110101 011111 100101010 11010 1100111111111110010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 561
Words 117
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 4, 5
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

the poem is about losing myself in the process of loving someone else I was blinded by my selfish obsession i then broken my heart and lost myself in the process now I’ve learned to love just love yourself there’s no other better the moment you start focusing on yourself things start falling into place now I know that I am Enough , Beautiful, Strong , Smart .

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Submitted by mbalinonabe on February 09, 2023

Modified on April 16, 2023

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