Analysis of If You and Me were Together

SamiBukhsh 1991 (Karachi)



This pleasant weather, when arrives,
Wishes, many wishes, then arise

If you and me were together,
How nicer would seem the wether,

If endless were the streets,
And deeper were the trees,
Then closer would we walk,
And slower would we talk,

If faster were the rain,
We would stop in vain,
If cooler were the breeze,
It would make us freeze,

More happiness would we gather,
If you and me were together.


Scheme xx Aa xbcc ddbb aA
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101 101010101 11010010 1101101 110001 010001 110111 010111 110001 11101 110001 11111 11001110 11010010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 404
Words 89
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

The poet talks about a future time when he thinks he will be with his love. He imagines the particular time and mentions the things he would do.

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Written on March 04, 2023

Submitted by houseo.72468 on March 03, 2023

Modified on March 11, 2023

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