Analysis of Finally



I can vibe with you til the end of time
I never thought I would find my person
And now it hurts me
That the time didn’t align
I wish I could rewind the time
So that I could kiss you
One last time
I sit and think
And the weight of my thoughts
Weigh me down
I feel the tears come down
I feel myself drown
All the possibilities I see disappear
My heart becoming faint
Remembering your touch
And those sweet lips
I just wish
Just want
Just miss
That kiss
I fell for your vibe
Now I have to get off
And I want to stay for the ride
Our souls connected on so much more
It is breaking me to know that there is no more
Not another kiss or touch
That feeling down deep in my gut
Is driving me crazy because Im
Yearning for more
I wish I could reopen the door
I don’t want to lose any more
I am pissed
I waited so long
Now Im scared to lose the feeling I never felt before

I just want more
More of you
More time
More laughs
More smiles
More vibes
More good times
And
Now it is
gone


Scheme AXXXABAXXCCCXXDXXXEEXXXFFDXXFFFXXF FBAXXXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110111 1101111110 01111 101101 11111001 111111 111 1101 001111 111 110111 1111 1001001101 110101 010011 0111 111 11 11 11 11111 111111 01111101 1010101111 111011111111 1010111 11011011 110110011 1011 111101001 11111101 111 11011 11111010110101 1111 111 11 11 11 11 111 0 111 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 994
Words 226
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 34, 10
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 382
Words per stanza (avg) 103

About this poem

Had a great vibe and awesome soul connection

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Written on February 25, 2023

Submitted by Adsanders26 on February 27, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ashley Sa

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