Analysis of Ruins
People love to tell me I'm lost, but what they don't understand is; I'm not lost I'm forgotten.
I've been forgotten, not by other people, I've forgot myself, I don't know who I am.
Am I gay or am I straight?
Am I loved or am I hated?
Am I smart or am I dumb?
Am I alive or am I dead...?
Honestly, I couldn't tell you. I've lost myself in the ruins, the ruins of trauma, the ruins or depression, of heartbreak that the love only ever appeared on one side, of people who promise and swear they wont leave but the second shit gets hard, I don't see them.
They don't re-appear. they leave for good, for some pretty girl they met on Instagram or Facebook or snapchat. They leave me and when they do, I'm left to be forgotten in the ruins. I'm left in the dust, I'm left to only dig myself a deeper hole.
They say 6 ft. under is enough to be qualified as dead, but right now I'm digging myself a 100 ft. hole. i know that to everyone I'm alive. but in my book you aren't alive if you have no emotion, your stuck with your heart beating and your just breathing.
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Metre | 1011111111110111111010 110101110101011111111 1111111 11111110 1111111 11011111 1001101111100100101100101010111011010011111101100111110101111111 11101111111101111111111110111111101000101100111110110101 1111010111101111111010111111101011011110011111010111111001110 |
Characters | 1,080 |
Words | 218 |
Sentences | 17 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 9 |
Lines Amount | 9 |
Letters per line (avg) | 88 |
Words per line (avg) | 23 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 791 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 210 |
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Written on February 22, 2023
Submitted by oopsash123456789 on February 22, 2023
Modified on April 27, 2023
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