Analysis of Wife Sick and Tired



She’s sick and tired.
Lots of bunk time.
Reading.
Listening to music.
Aching shoulders, lower back.
Fibromyalgia?
Doctors say
It’s just a head game.
Nothing to prescribe.
Nothing to give
Except sneering looks.
Wife commits to rest and prayer.
Getting there.
And soon…
Beachball tossed in the Air.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLLML
Poetic Form Tetractys  (47%)
Metre 11010 1111 10 100110 1010101 1 101 11011 10101 1011 01101 1011101 101 01 11001
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 302
Words 59
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 233
Words per stanza (avg) 48

About this poem

Based on a true life account. When hopelessness tried its best. Fibromyalgia.

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Written on February 19, 2023

Submitted by dougb.21370 on February 19, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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