Analysis of One step forward

One step forward 2005 (Cradock)



One step forward
Two steps backward
Thats how i move and its hard

There is no moving forward im just going back  
I can't see , im in this dark hole where it's black
I can't see, but  feel satan standing on my neck

I don't know how , i can feel its smell
It smells so devastating like im in hell
And i swear you don't wanna feel it

I love dark but sometimes it makes me hesitate
But imma heal my self, imma just meditate
I won't discuss it cause it will end as a debate

Huh i can feel my self knocking in heaven gate
2023 imma focus building my self
But fistly imma delete the things i hate

"F*ck Savi " , " Savi is a fool " , " imma brag "
I took all those comments i pet em in a bag
Those comments made me who i am now

But imma make them shock like "wow"
They'll be my fans asking them self "how"
That's where I'll ride them like some cow

Oww im also living for my self here
I had anger inside me like an bare
But now i know they ain't worth my attention

But its a new year imma forgive y'all
But i know in future I'll receive your call
Now i realized im moving forward like a ball


Scheme AAX BBX CCX DDD DXD EEF FFF XXX GGG
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 1110 1111011 111101011101 11110111111 111111010111 111111111 1111001101 011111011 11110111110 111111110 1101111111001 111111100101 1101011 111010111 111110111 111110111001 110111111 1111111 111110111 11111111 1110101111 1110011111 11111111010 11011101 11101010111 111011010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,108
Words 252
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

Forgetting about my past and finally forgiving my enemies

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Written on January 07, 2023

Submitted by singalakha922 on January 20, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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