Analysis of Indeed ... She's Got Some Fame



No idea of all her pain
When they say she has to gain
Her body only is the main
When they see she's got a stain

Now also confidence she lacks
Now sorrow and fear she packs
They speak and preach she's a mess
That's right that's wrong and now i guess

Her tears that flow can fill a lake
But then they say they're all fake
All the stories they all make
I beg forgive them for God's sake

Oh God their actions I publicize
Their words are weapons I emphasize
That bring her down when they criticize
The sins they commit their own demise

I truly know she's going to heal
Her rights they took she will reveal
Her style her smile shall gain appeal
Because I know she's strong indeed.


Scheme AAAA BBCC DDDD EEEE FFFX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 10101101 1111111 01010101 1111101 11010011 1100111 1101101 11110111 01111101 1111111 1010111 11011111 11110110 11110110 11011110 011011101 110111011 01111101 01011101 01111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 698
Words 156
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 27

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A poem about a regretful lover who was betrayed by a partner in their relationship

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Written on May 12, 2007

Submitted by omuhlebabalwa on January 01, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Omuhle Babalwa

born and raised in Shakaskraal, nkobongo and currently attending the North Coast Agricultural College in Shakaskraal, doing grade 11 this year, turning 16 years old more…

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