Analysis of If Heaven Had A Phone



If Heaven had a phone would she call me or I call her,
If Heaven had a phone she would call for my birthday, holidays, anniversaries,
If Heaven had a phone I would get voice messages everyday saying she loves me and she misses me,
If Heaven had a phone then I would be able to get congratulations calls when I do something awesome at work or school or in my family or I get honored,
If Heaven had a phone maybe a smartphone I could video call chat with her,
If Heaven had a phone I could talk to everyday about the good and the bad,
If Heaven had a phone I could tell her goodnight,
If Heaven had a phone I could finally tell her goodbye since I missed it the first time,
If Heaven had a phone I could I could simply hear her say “ It’s mom, I called to say I love you!”
If Heaven had a phone....


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Poetic Form
Metre 11010111111110 110101111111100100 11010111111001011011101101 11010111111011001011111010111110110011110 1101011001111001110 11010111111010101001 11010111101 110101111001011111011 110101111110101111111111 110101
Characters 806
Words 173
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 62
Words per line (avg) 16
Letters per stanza (avg) 615
Words per stanza (avg) 163

About this poem

Inspired by my bestie who lost his mother

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Written on September 21, 2020

Submitted by haynieslove89 on January 16, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Tamara Haynie

Mother of 2 special needs children. A happily married woman. Writing since I was a teenager. more…

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