Analysis of Living or existing



Some of us think we're living.
Were barely existing
We live a lifetime no one knows it
Until the day comes were no longer living
No one knows the difference.
If we were
Living or existing?


Scheme AABACDA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110 010010 11011111 01011011010 1110100 110 101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 198
Words 40
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 149
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

When I retired, I realized I was never living life, just Existing in my mind.

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Written on February 03, 2023

Submitted by pehicks51 on February 03, 2023

Modified on April 14, 2023

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