Analysis of Pigeon Buddies Released

Douglas Blair 1951 (London)



We keep them on the Rooftop
Cages crudely crafted
Sheet metal windbreak and above.
We come from hovels under
Our birds’ mystique to wonder
And food and drink them
Full with love.
They take us on their wings
Band message writ that sings
To a friend or two.
Their Project west a bit.
And they respond in kind.
A culture on the Wind.
The birds, the blesed heart
Of all of it.


Scheme ABCDDECFFGHIIJH
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111101 101010 1101001 1111010 10101110 01011 111 111111 110111 10111 110101 010101 010101 01011 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 374
Words 78
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 292
Words per stanza (avg) 72

About this poem

A poet friend of mine Anthony Gomez (South Carolina), spoke of earlier years in New Jersey tending many-coloured pigeons rooftop. Enjoying an exhilarating escape and community. Messenger birds, beloved.

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Written on January 26, 2023

Submitted by dougb.72572 on January 26, 2023

Modified by dougb.72572 on January 26, 2023

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Douglas Blair

Blogging poems since 2008. Once a lawyer in general practice. Then 32 years as Shipper in a heavy metal fabricating plant. Retired 2022. Married and father of two. Poet. Hiker. Harmonica Busker. Gospel enthusiast. Photographer. http://shootdempix.blogspot.com/ more…

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