Analysis of 4%

Jeffrey Powell 1979 (Pittsburgh, PA)



Diverted eyes
Thinking about trying to read minds
when making up my story
gets stale but ongoing

Diverging lies
Knowing the headlines aren't the frontlines
is false solace anyway
illusion = delusion

Diminished cries
Misery is the price of admission
accepting the score
is seldom done internally

Deleted whys
Sanity is not so easily preserved
forgetting some memories
doesn't vanquish the pain

Defeated sighs
Comforting nonetheless is,
slowly but surely, –suffocating each–
our guilt will not be the same


Scheme AXBX AAXC ACXB AXXX AXXX
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 0101 100110111 1101110 11110 0101 10011001 111010 010010 0101 1001011010 01001 11010100 0101 10011110001 0101100 101001 0101 100011 101101001 10111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 511
Words 84
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 84
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

I wrote this (circa 2012) contemplating how l am different from others. It's true that everyone is different in different ways, but there is a minority of true uniqueness among the mainstream masses of humanity.

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Jeffrey Powell

A bit of an introvert, Jeffrey enjoys using words and poetry as an outlet for expressing his thoughts and feelings. He tends to play by his own rules and darts in and out of the civilized world, as avoiding the conventional gathering is more his style. Jeffrey lives with his fraternal twin whom he enjoys sharing a laugh with at the opportune time. more…

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