Analysis of Tired



Tired
Not the type of tired you think
I wish I could just blink and be okay.
Lie in a lake
I just need a break.
I’m mentally drained
I’m unwell
I know you can tell.
Please stop putting your shit on me
I’m only a teen.
I don’t deserve this
I miss not being tired
I miss being ok.
Let me sleep
Let me weep
In a mental kind of way.


Scheme ABCDDEFFGHIACJJC
Poetic Form
Metre 10 10111011 111111011 1001 11101 11001 11 11111 11101111 11001 11011 1111010 111011 111 111 0010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 343
Words 79
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 247
Words per stanza (avg) 72

About this poem

The type of tired that you don’t need sleep for.

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Written on January 19, 2023

Submitted by Zenaw2009 on January 22, 2023

Modified on March 28, 2023

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Zena Williams

I’m a young poet and many people have told me that I’m really good. So i thought i’d give it a shot on here. I’m only 14 and going to be in highschool soon. I enjoy the emotion of poetry. It keeps me going. more…

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