Analysis of Still Standing

Aszia T. 2006 (Hospital)



Tell her mother that she tries she works so hard and often cries
She feels she's never good enough and makes her exterior seem so tough
But the truth is every night
horrible thoughts she has to fight
As she sits alone her eyes start to tear
She fights her mind which she thinks a mental fear
Wonderin' if anyone can hear her cry or even her sighs
But no one's listening not even her friend
It was supposed to always be A+K till the end
And now she's sitting there crying
All broken up inside and no one even cares
Or they would've asked why.


Scheme ABCCDEAFFGHI
Poetic Form
Metre 101011111110101 111101010100100111 10111001 10011111 1110101111 11011110101 1110110111001 11110011001 110111101101 01110110 110101011101 111011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 542
Words 107
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 429
Words per stanza (avg) 106

About this poem

It's about a girl who think she has issues with herself but it's really all in her head.

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Written on January 20, 2023

Submitted on January 20, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Aszia T.

I'm 16 I love writing songs, stories and poems. I also love singing because I'm very good at it and I love interior designing. more…

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