Analysis of Lasting Impression



Never remind me of my past
It means nothing
The present is a constantly disappointing past
It all goes away and becomes memory
Becomes nothing, dust, nature
if only I didn’t matter
I cant disappear
I must hold on
I am holding for dear life
It isn’t a fun ride
It was never fun
It was just a ride


Scheme ABACDDEFGHIH
Poetic Form
Metre 10011111 1110 010101000101 11101001100 0110110 1101110 1101 1111 1110111 11011 11101 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 299
Words 59
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 233
Words per stanza (avg) 59

About this poem

I was going through a rough time, so this was helping me cope.

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Written on January 11, 2021

Submitted by bennettm.22202 on January 18, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Benny McCluskey

Benny is an actor, and writer. They are recent graduate of the University of Memphis with a degree in theatre. Some of their interests include Dungeons and Dragons and Tarot Reading. more…

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