Analysis of living without a Jesus



Living without a Jesus

I have left the Church of man, as I wear my shirt and
mini-skirts
my head teams to my same human form
of myself and other woman's pleasures--
ah, the cradles of being the world's first Virgin Man
have I but been but just another spineless, brainless woman, am I not but a MAN?
Am I not your deliever Jesus, Mary Magdelene? Jesus will rape you if he knew you're a gay-lesbian
woman in a man's body--
a mermaid; a merman; a mermim;
am I a man or a woman? I'm gay. Get over yourself.
An attractive Black woman pretending to be a blond woman or blond man with blue eyes.
A blue Star-- My period's calling...!
Am I beautiful?


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Poetic Form
Metre 1001010 1110111111110 101 111111101 110101010 1010110011101 111111010101010111101 111111010110111111101100 1000110 010101 110110101111001 1010110010110110111111 011110010 11100
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 648
Words 132
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 13
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 244
Words per stanza (avg) 62
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Written on 2021

Submitted by shelina_s on January 16, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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shelina denise chapman

I am a scizhorprenic ever since I was only 19. I graduated from a high school called Denbigh High School in Newport News, Virginia in that same year. I have no friends except my desire to read and write creatively. Amious Mundus est! more…

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