Analysis of My Immortal Love

Hilary Uhl 1985 (Philadelphia, PA)

Ode


My skin craves your touch
I scratch it raw
I would rend the flesh from my bone
Before I would forget you
My immortal love
Exposing blood and bone
I wait for you
In the dirt I'll be
Waiting patiently


Scheme ABCDECDFF
Poetic Form Nonet (44%)
Metre 11111 1111 11101111 0111011 10101 010101 1111 00111 10100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 198
Words 40
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 158
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Written on January 11, 2023

Submitted by hilarysaurusrex on January 11, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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