Analysis of Walk With



M.J.Hill
"Walk With"  
Nov. 4, 2015

Walk with me
Just for awhile
I only want your soul & make you turn your back on everyone
C'mon walk with me through hell
I promise I'll bring you up not down
I guarantee the best high of em all
Either way I'll own you for eternity
I'll make you jones and call my name but once you get me back you'll be perfectly fine again
Walk with me awhile
I promise you won't need anything or anyone else
I'll fulfill your emptiness without me you will be full of emptiness
C'mon let's walk for awhile I can show you what the fuss is all about
Just be careful cause at the same time I'll snatch away everything you've ever loved and make you turn on your family
Friends? What friends? I'm the only one you'll ever need
Cmon I won't judge you
All I'll ever do is take away your home right along with everything you own
I want to be all that you need
I don't care if you lost everything for me or not
Remember you wanted me I didn't ask for you personally
My entry to hell
I promise you'll wish you never met me
You'll keep crawling back regardless of how bad you want to tell me no
Come on let's walk for awhile


Scheme AXX BAXAXABXAXXXACXXCXAABXA
Poetic Form
Metre 1 11 1 111 1101 11011111111110 0111111 110111111 101011111 10111110100 1111011111111111100101 11101 110111101101 101110001111111100 011110111111011101 1110110111101101101011111100 111101011101 11111 1110111011110111011 11111111 111111101111 01011011101111000 11011 1101111011 11101010111111111 1111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,149
Words 244
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 3, 23
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 439
Words per stanza (avg) 113

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Drug Addiction

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Written on November 04, 2015

Submitted by jhasehill67 on December 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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