Analysis of Serenity in a sequence



Boundless Joy toss my subconscious mind,
As I meditate on a life void
of misunderstanding and chaos,
suspended from this leftovers,
Beyond our reach;beyond space.

The location - i can't fathom,
Yet I am held captivated,
In daydream of ecstatic unending,
Peace priceless as pearls,
Where serenity is my mother tongue.

Jingles of celestial bells,
Shrieks of cymbals, tambourines,harps,
and various stringed instruments,
Forcibly sending me signals of motions,
Electrified in swings of uneasiness,
In a nutshell shaking butts,
In accolades to the supreme sire.

Soaring on high with winged people,
Viewing my being down the streets,
made of pure gold,beyond recognition,
Luxurious mansions, gagantuan enough
to habitate numbers of persons.
Flocking every nooks and crannies,
An army of rugged face staring,
In a March towards the courtroom,
 Chanting," A reign of our monarch".

I commemorate with the tranquility,
A life full of ease, uninterrupted,
A moment unfolded for eternity,
The smile,joy,shout,and roar,
Tearing from every throat.
Beholding our ancient fathers
In the pages,
Visiting nobles and elders,
In monuments of celerity.
 Poem by inks


Scheme XXABX XCDXX XAXEXXX XXXXEXDXX FCFXXBXBFX
Poetic Form
Metre 101110101 11101011 10010010 0101110 011011 00101110 1111100 011010010 11011 1010011101 1010101 11101 01001100 10010110110 010011100 001101 010100110 10111110 10110101 1111010 010010101 1110110 101001010 110110110 0010101 10011101 1010100100 011110010 01001010100 011 1011001 010101010 0010 10010010 010010100 1011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,150
Words 218
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 7, 9, 10
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 185
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

This poem is all about the daydream of the writer.He is seen imagining on s better life beyond this horizon called "earth" which is free from pains, misunderstanding and chaos.His imaginary Dreamland is heaven - home of the celestials.

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Written on December 28, 2022

Submitted by fatusitunde52 on December 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Fatusi Tunde (inks)

Am a young poet.A lover of nature and creativity.My hobbies are singing and graphic designs. more…

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