Analysis of Nature



We first met when I was young.
Curious, expectant, open-minded
We explored each other freely,
Communing face to face
Sharing everything
Seeking each other's company, together
Under the open sky.

Middle aged we met again.
Striving, over-reaching, exploitative
We looked to our own advantage.
Stormy clouds gathering
On the horizon,
Presaging dangerous times ahead of us
Under the threat'ning sky.

Now I am older I see her
Dull-eyed, disconsolate, all too aware
Of what we were and have become.
Her cycle confused,
Stripped bare, ripped apart
Craving to be isolate, for solitude
Under the darkened sky.

She will still be there when I'm gone.
Forgotten, unrecognised, unaware
Of what we once had and had lost.
Her nature restored,
Newly clothed, new born
Thriving in her renewed joy in life
Under the spring sun sky.


Scheme XXXXABC XXXAXXC BDXXXXC XDXXXXC
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 1000101010 10111010 010111 1010 10110100010 100101 1011101 101010100 111101010 101100 10010 10010010111 100111 11110110 1111101 11100101 01001 11101 101110110 100101 11111111 010101 11111011 01001 10111 100001101 100111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 817
Words 151
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 7
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 162
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

I wrote this after watching documentaries about the natural world on TV. It reflects the way man's relationship to nature has changed during my lifetime, since the early 1960s.

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Submitted by winge.bass on December 13, 2022

Modified on April 01, 2023

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Bill Inge

I am a teacher of the Classics, born in the Midlands and now, married and with three grown-up children, living in north Wales. I enjoy problem solving and learning new things. more…

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