Analysis of Maa or Ghar

Mayank Gulati 1998 (Faridabad)



Kal raat maa ki yaadon me sirf karvate badal raha tha
Ghar se dur rehkar bas ghar ko yaad kar raha tha
Ye kamane ki chah kha le aayi humko
Jis azadi k liye tadapte the aj us azadi me mera dam ghut raha tha
Maa ke hath ke khane ki barabri ye pizza burger kaha krenge
Raat ko thandi roti khate hue m wo maa ke hath ki bani dal yaad kar raha tha
Kal raat m akele me ghar ko yaad kar raha tha
Wo papa ki daant wo maa ki tok ghar late aane pr unke sawal jawab yaad kar raha tha
Kal karvate badalte waqt m maa ki god yaad kar raha tha
Haa m ghar se dur rehkar ghar ko yaad kar rha tha
Nikalte waqt kaha th mne unse “m reh skta hu akele dhyn rakh skta hu apna”
Pr tabyt khrb hui to maa ka khayal rakhna yaad kar rha tha
Wo ladai maa baap se mera kehna “m bada ho gaya hu ab yun toka na karo mujhe” par aaj m maa baap ka tokna yaad kar raha tha
Haa m ghar se dur rehkar ghar ko yaad kar rha tha
Jab maa baap puchte hai ki kaisa h tu kehta hu thik hu m
Par unka beta kitna akela h m ye btane ko tadap raha tha
Haa m kl rote hue apne ghar ko yaad kar raha tha
Ya yun kahu kal m apne maa baap k sath bitaye hai pal ko yaad kar raha tha
Haa m ghar se dur rehkar ghar ko yaad kar raha tha


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Characters 1,196
Words 280
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 904
Words per stanza (avg) 268

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Jab ghar se dur hote hue maa or ghar ki yaad aati hai tab kaisa feel hota hai

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Written on November 19, 2022

Submitted by mgulati514 on December 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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