Analysis of If love judges



If love judges
The heart will avenge
The mind of human will be filled with stones
Only to break the pain,
Giving a 100 and receiving a 30

She decorated her name with gold
Labelled with emojis on the social life
Wanting a mutual feeling out of no pain
But reality opened the blinder on her face
Only if love was selfish
Only if love was hate

Loving her every single day,
Waking up to daily affection
Then a certain morning, she received no affection
Covered with worries
In despair, throbbing pains, bothered about what happened
She came to the realisation that all the love she received was her effort
Only if love judges

She was nothing compared to a weed
Uprooted in ripe season
But love will always love
If only love judges
She could have avenged the pain.
Oh little wonder, like a flowers drying when our of season
Love is pain.


Scheme AXXBX XXBXXX XCCXXXA XCXABCB
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 01101 0111011111 101101 10000100 11000111 101110101 100100101111 11010010101 1011110 101111 100100101 101110010 1010101011010 10110 0011011001110 1110111011011010 101110 111001101 0100110 11111 110110 1110101 11010101010110110 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 836
Words 161
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 7, 7
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 168
Words per stanza (avg) 39

About this poem

This poem is all about showing love to the ones you love, thereby dedicating so many things so you can love them so much but you end up realising the feeling is not mutual. You place people in your precious space and fill them with rubies and gold tags but in the end, your love was just a flowing river about to dry off.

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Submitted by joicebolu on December 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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