Analysis of Forlorn Endeavour
Rhythms feeding, rising feathers
wind enticing, leaping into his hands
rather came to perch a place
she arrives to build, a new life
Whether her beak is a scarlet
or filled with juicy seeds
awakening the mornings
with chirpy deeds
learning from her shyness
he never want her to flew even
without the consent of alluring white petals
he granted permission to joy the hope
gathering the tiny feathers and twines
rendering woolen ball with a doorway
awaiting the sweet hatching cries
mourns out of your pearl shell
now the tree is mourning, nest is hanging
never seen her this way even
a small rain can restrain
the hopes once given, turning sweetness
to a flaming honey, trembling loneliness
Scheme | AXXX XBXB CDXX AXXX XDXCC |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10101010 1010100111 1011101 10111011 10011010 111101 0100010 1101 101010 110101110 010011010110 1100101101 1000101001 100101101 01001101 111111 1011101110 10101110 011101 011101010 101010100100 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 693 |
Words | 123 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 5 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 113 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 24 |
About this poem
It's a poem about the mourning of a tree towards a bird who left him lonely.
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Written on December 31, 2022
Submitted by sreenurs001 on December 30, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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