Analysis of Bound Without Love



In the naked light she was torn
So I was the one who sworn
To protect her at all cost
To remove men from their lust
To let people find the light
To shine for everyone so bright

I fell deep in a hole
Whereafter she had stole
My heart and gave me breath
And sew my wounds underneath

And now I have grown
Like a plant that is lone
Onto the life she gave me
I was one to never see
What I have become
So ugly, yet so handsome
Being almost witchcraft
I blew the air from her raft

She started sinking
We drowned.


Scheme AAXXBB CCXX DDEEFFGG XX
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 00101111 1110111 1010111 1011111 1110101 1111011 111001 1111 110111 011101 01111 101111 1001111 1111101 11101 1101110 1011 1101101 11010 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 508
Words 109
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 8, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

This poem was written after me and my ex girlfriend broke up. It was about how I wanted to be her protector against inhumane decisions and people whom wanted to see her suffer. Then came the part where we were bound together, toxic and dying inside while we were sure we were meant to be. We were caught into creating a dark place for us, where we were together without love, couldn't see what went wrong.

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Written on March 19, 2021

Submitted by brinkhartogh1200 on December 12, 2022

Modified on March 14, 2023

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