Analysis of bottom

azdi404 1967 (california)



I watch myself from the high tower
of your bottom deep pit
where darkness breathes overhead ... 
surrounded with nowhere to fall,
conscious so clear,
superiority so thin of ancient wisdom, 
sacrificing what I know,
drifting through stale air in a canal weary 
to find myself passing landscapes of graffiti
where spirits die without a grave to call my own...


Scheme ABCDEFGHHI
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 11110110 111011 1101101 0101111 1011 001001111010 100111 10111000110 1111011010 110101011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 375
Words 64
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 285
Words per stanza (avg) 54

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finding a place

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Submitted by azdi404 on December 25, 2022

Modified by azdi404 on March 20, 2023

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