Analysis of Not for Lust, But Curiosity



I flew through the stars
As fast as I could
Into galaxies beyond reach
Fireballs of pieces

Flung out by hand
Into the abyss
Always falling, falling
Past constellations

They are coming with
Fingers of God
What the fuck are you on
God has nothing to do with this

But still I fly
Terrifingly fast towards
The gaseous planets
In their holy places

What is this remnant
Of star dust here
Cast among the wise men's
Cartographic pleasure

Hello North Star!
I have seen your spouse
Kind and loving yet
Dancing with praise

Lovers you are
And guide you will
By the deep gravity
Protecting you

Dark matter seeks
Out the flame of
Absorption razing
The patterns useful

Comets thrash
Towards the calm
Serenity of Creation
Edens peace offer

But who is this
Astronaut tiny
A flitting insect
With dino juice?

Propel, propel
Not for lust
But curiosity
Power be damned

Exoskeleton of
Gleaming white
Chirping in
Encrypted flits

What strange animal
Abandons flotsam
Among the quiet gods
Sleeping priests

Wake not the centaur
Wake not the virgin
Wake not the bear
We shall survive.


Scheme AXXB XCDX XXXC XXXB XXXE FXXX FXGX XHDI XXXE CGXX XXGX HXJA IXXX XJXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 11111 01100011 10110 1111 01001 11010 1010 11101 1011 101111 11101111 1111 1101 010010 011010 11110 1111 101011 110 0111 11111 10101 1011 1011 0111 101100 0101 1101 1011 01010 01010 101 0101 01001010 10110 1111 1010 0101 1101 0101 111 10100 1011 01001 101 100 0101 11100 01010 010101 101 1101 11010 1101 1101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,075
Words 205
Sentences 3
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 56
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

This poem was published in Aurora, Colorado in December of 2022 as is a reflection on being an astronaut.

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Written on December 19, 2022

Submitted by lolimjoshingyou on December 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:01 min read
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Joshua Brown

Joshua Brown started as a religious preacher in a Independent Fundamental Baptist church, his works include "A Child is Not Innocent" and "Female Empathetic Male." more…

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