Analysis of Pain in my heart



The pain I feel is real
I have no heart anymore
The pain in my heart
Is so damn unbearable
Hurts like hell
The pain in my heart
Hurts like hell
The pain in my heart
Needs to be healed
Lord please heal this
Pain in my heart
You were the best
Father a girl could
Ever ask for
Man I miss you
so much.
The pain in my heart
is forever.


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Poetic Form
Metre 011111 111101 01011 1110100 111 01011 111 01011 1111 1111 1011 1001 10011 1011 1111 11 01011 1010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 334
Words 77
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 257
Words per stanza (avg) 72

About this poem

This poem is dedicated to my father who passed away from liver cancer on 5-8-2022

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Written on May 08, 2022

Submitted by antoinettejesseabelard2014 on November 04, 2022

Modified on March 11, 2023

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Antoinette Abelard

Antoinette Abelard 38 year old mother of 8. Born and raised in Spring Valley NY. Raised by a single mother of 6. Both my parents are immigrants, mother from England and Father from Haiti. I have been writing my whole life, writing is my passion and my safety net. more…

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