Analysis of Goodbye but you never left



This was our last call and just like that
I saw us splitting
Our worlds falling apart
The world ending
My thoughts dying
I saw her crying
I was too
This is hard, i can't cope
All i have is some hope

Hope that youre okay and alive
Hope you havent forgotten me
Hope we will meet again in the unreal infinite water fountain sight
Mountains all around, galaxies over head in the night

Hope we will meet again
Maybe not on this earth
Maybe not in this world

Maybe in some timeline i have you, you have me,
Its us and us for the world of our happiness.

I still have these thoughts
And after i die
You'll be in my unreal mind
Love it is hard to find
You proved me wrong, your love made me strong
Strong enough to save you from the galactic demons.


Scheme XAXAAAXBB XCDD XXX CX XXEEXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110110111 11110 1011001 0110 1110 11010 111 111111 111111 1111001 1110101 111101000110010101 10101100101001 111101 101111 101011 100110111111 1101101110100 11111 01011 1101011 111111 111111111 1011111001010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 748
Words 158
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 9, 4, 3, 2, 6
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

This poem is about some girl who's my everything, first person who could understand my thinking process my emotions, first person i ever fell in love with, our differences made us love each other even more but i lost her. We never met but her texts online made me more happier around the people i care for. This poem is about our last call and what happened after it.

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Written on July 11, 2022

Submitted by shrikantangiras72 on November 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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