Analysis of In The Autumn Fall



What is happening to witness.
Observed to remove,
Deniers forced from their comfort zones.
Is the rising of supported false prophets.
Followed blindly and endorsed,
By the many allowing themselves publicly...
Their mental instabilities,
Become a way of life to live.
As if a choice to choose to accuse and blame,
What is happening to witness...
Has nothing to do,
To face the ending of their own game played!
That justifies a diseasing mindset.
Self inflicted and limited to permit,
A crumbling to ruin truth to fiction it.

Delusion kept to praise,
With a determination to eliminate...
Whatever remnants are left,
Of a accepted normalcy.
Exchanged to replace,
Images worshipped and idolize created facts.
Is what is happening to witness.
And the ones awakening,
Have begun to know that.

There is no escaping,
From what has begun to fade away.
There is nowhere to run and hide.
In the Autumn Fall of false prophets.
Crazed.
Yet...
There is nothing left anyone can say,
To those allowing themselves to follow...
Seeking to validate this choice they've made.
Hoping,
At the high cost they have paid...
Returns to them,
A non-existing fiction.
Gone.
Erased.
From a consciousness.
Too late to use common sense.
Nolonger theirs to reminisce,
Or remember the benefits to prioritize...
What was meant to value more,
Than the deceiving of false prophets.
Tormenting their minds successfully,
With a feeding of egos.
And hypnotizing narcissism.
Nonstop to fill their own pockets!

'They are frauds.
Lieing deceiving thieves.
Out of their minds and crazed.
And ruining your way of life.
With a doing to destroy,
Every freedom of entitlement...
Today you have been given.
Yet tomorrow,
It is possible you may not receive.
And...
You still refuse to see that happening?'

'Come on.
You're just saying that,
Because you have been made convinced...
A democracy that represents diversity,
Can only sustain a maintained greatness...
If all ethnicities are equally represented.
And we have chosen to endorse and support,
Those we see...
Who continue to deliver,
Images and visuals...
More associated with our wishes and dreams.'

'Even if...
Your endorsing support,
Has nothing to do to benefit you.'

'That is your perception.
And a point of view,
That has nothing to do with truth or its reality!

'Poorer gets the minds of those unconsious.'

'Say what you will.
But you are not the one,
Promising me prosperity or riches...
Beyond my belief.'

'If only you faithfully keep,
Donating what you don't have.
Kept to imagine,
Your suffering to sacrifice...
Will one day have you waving,
From the back of a chauffeured driven...
Limousine. Right?'

'That's the plan.
Only fools like you would think me stupid!'

'No.
The odds are against my observations.
Majority rules.
Even over the proof of truth and its evidence!'


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (26%)
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,800
Words 567
Sentences 68
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 15, 9, 25, 11, 11, 3, 3, 1, 4, 7, 2, 4
Lines Amount 95
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 181
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Written on December 04, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on December 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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