Analysis of Insomina
My eyelids are heaven and earth.
They race to reach each other but never meet.
Impossible like finding a needle in a hay stack.
They twitch and itch.
But all I can do is see.
I try to scream,
To shout,
But it seems my echoes of agony bounced of the wall.
My eyes weigh more than my entire body.
More like a weighing balance with a story building on each end.
I see day and night as the same
With only the darkness thrown at night as the difference.
I clinch my pillow, but cannot feel a pinch of sleep.
I wallow in my sorrow.
Like a bride awaiting her wedding day,
I yearn for daytime.
To find solace in companion of friends.
Building sandcastles or snow men.
Many find sleep to be schlock,
But it is the very ware I cannot buy
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Metre | 1111001 11111101101 01001100100011 1101 1111111 1111 11 11111011001101 11111101010 1101010101010111 11101101 11001011110100 1111011010111 1100110 1010100101 1111 1110001011 101111 1011111 11101011101 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 761 |
Words | 167 |
Sentences | 15 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 6, 7 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 193 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 49 |
About this poem
Description of sleeplessness
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Written on December 01, 2022
Submitted by victorugbala9 on November 30, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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