Analysis of In the night



A velvet touch
warmly glides
caressing me
as I lie

nestled in
a hollow formed
a warm place
I long to be

a flame flickers
soft glowing flame
longing to grow
to consume me

empty longing
wanting to be
with warmth filled
a hungry need

from a distance
a worried gaze
fretful watching
from far away

wanting yet
acting not
fearing now
to be replaced

full of need
to be filled
taking what
I might find

in the night
as I lie
on velvet touch
that I need


Scheme axbC xxxb xxxb dbef xxdx xxxx fexx xCaf
Poetic Form
Metre 0101 101 0101 111 100 0101 011 1111 0110 1101 1011 1011 1010 1011 111 0101 1010 0101 1010 1101 101 101 101 111 111 111 101 111 001 111 1101 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 466
Words 95
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 11
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Written on November 20, 2022

Submitted by wakofoed on November 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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William A. Kofoed

William A. Kofoed was born in Logan Utah. He now lives in Magna Utah. He was a member of Mormon Youth Chorus and the Jay Welch Chorale. He is a published photographer. He started writing poetry in high school and he has been published in Poetry Quarterly, Utah Life and The Route 7 Review. more…

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