Analysis of When does dreaming ends?”

Cecilia Dizon 1982 (Norzagaray, Bulacan)



“When does dreaming ends?”

I saw your face smiling at me
Your eyes speaks it all
You also missed me after all

I smiled at you and hold you tight
Trying not to let you go
And forever be by my side.

As I saw you standing there
I wanted to cry
But never had the reason why

As I saw standing there
I realize it is “you”
That can drive away my blue

I just hope you won’t disappear
As I wake up with tears
And realize you were just a part of my dream…


Scheme X XAA XXX BCC BDD XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 11111011 11111 11011101 11110111 1011111 00101111 1111101 11011 11010101 111101 110111 1110111 1111101 111111 01010101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 462
Words 103
Sentences 3
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

poem about loving someone unconditionally without them knowing your existence.

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Written on November 25, 2016

Submitted by cecilia.dizon1125 on October 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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