Analysis of To Old Pup



To Old Pup
(on the farm long ago)

’Round and ’round and ’round
in a circle ’til he died
Old Pup walked

In the middle of the field
He’d found though he was blind
I guess he knew how to find it
It was one he’d chased odd sprites across many, many times

He stayed close to the house when he lost his sight
I’d feed him by hand
That day though, he’d refused the meat

Old Pup had his pride

He would not stay where he had ruled in prime
Or lay him down where he once guarded
Too weak and old to stop a fly

He’d left, farewell, without a sound
And found that field...

August sun’s heat rose in waves like cicadas’ buzz
No breeze, no leaves moved, no dust stirred
The fierce heat stilled the countryside
Light green mesquite, buff brown drying weed
The sky, heat faded blue, two small white clouds, utterly still

The only movement, a small tan dog
Going ’round and ’round in a circle
In a barren cottonfield
Looking for a place to die

(to the one he loved, who loved him back
 he gave his loyal life, but hid from me his death
 even now, his last, noble gift
 wets my eyes and steals away my breath)


Scheme XX ABX CXXX XXX B XXD AC XXBXX XXAD XEXE
Poetic Form
Metre 111 101101 10101 0010111 111 0010101 111111 11111111 11111110110101 11110111111 11111 11110101 11111 1111111101 111111110 11011101 1110101 0111 101110110101 11111111 0111010 11111101 01110111111001 010100111 101010010 00101 1010111 101111111 111101111111 10111101 111010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,128
Words 228
Sentences 2
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 4, 3, 1, 3, 2, 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 84
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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Written on November 25, 2002

Submitted by steve-edwards on October 26, 2022

Modified on April 01, 2023

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William Stephen Edwards

William Stephen Edwards was raised on a dryland cotton farm in West Texas. He holds a BA in English (1965) and an MS in Speech/Language Pathology and Audiology (1972) from Texas Tech University. Mr. Edwards is a decorated Vietnam veteran and is divorced, with two daughters. Currently he is a retired Speech/Language Pathologist living in Austin, Texas. more…

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