Analysis of The Ray Of Light

Shabnam 1997 (Maliya)



Tha aandhera bohot mere jeevan me, tu aaya ek ujale ki tarah.
Dekhi na thi kabhi mene pehle itni roshni jeevan me kaha mene tujse, lekin tuney ye vishwas dilaya ke roshni to tere andar hi hai. Tu bas khol apni aankhein. Bandh aankhon se bhi bhala dikhe kbhi ujala.
Darr rahi thi me kholne se apni aankhein. Iss duniyan se anjaan, lekin tuney kaha tu khol apni aankhein ek baar, samne tere khada sirf me dikhunga.
Khushi se kholi mene apni aankhein, vishwas pe tere. Dekha mene teri aankhon me, muje mujse ho gaya pyar. Muje mujse ho gaya pyaar...
Duniyan se anjaan, na me kabhi jaati kahi. Lekin tuney kahan ek kadam to aage badha , agar gir gayi to hoon na me piche khada


Scheme ABCAD
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111111 11111111111111111111111111111111111111 111111111111111111111111111 1111111111110111111111111 111111111101111111011111111
Characters 674
Words 130
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 105
Words per line (avg) 25
Letters per stanza (avg) 526
Words per stanza (avg) 127

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A person whom I have loved unconditionally is the reason behind my happiness and sorrow.

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Written on October 12, 2022

Submitted by alizarangara786110 on October 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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