Analysis of Success

Sahil Kumar 2006 (Bokaro)



The comfort of your life,
Never end up at the condition delight,
Until you begin hard work to like,
Learn from mistakes and start your fight.

Consistency and hard work are best mates,
Procrastination and laziness success mostly hates,
The strategy you own have to create,
To obtain the desire you nominate.

Failure doesn't prove yourself wrong,
Success imposes by hard work and smart work along.

Dedication requires day in and day out,
To obtain achievement unfair means without.
Work for your aim daybreak throughout,
Attain your wish without getting miss out.

The cruel step you must learn,
Sacrifice all of your fun.
When you believe it's successful done,
For sure the battle of success you have won.


Scheme XAXA BBXX CC DDDD XEEE
Poetic Form
Metre 010111 10111001001 011011111 11010111 0100011111 0010010001101 0100111101 10100101100 10101011 0101011101101 01001010011 10101001101 1111101 0111011011 0101111 101111 110110101 11010101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 709
Words 139
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 2, 4, 4
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 24

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Success comes with determination and hardwork

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Written on October 08, 2022

Submitted by sahilaman1321 on October 08, 2022

Modified on April 19, 2023

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