Analysis of Side Bit

Jay Kas 1953 (Melbourne)



Side bit
Table laid to eat with food
Search for the side bit good
Life teaches to search the middle
To win the war of enemy riddle

Life spent in relation maintain
Surprise upsprings like fountain
Good time and luck remains last
Holding the entire bit high mast

People throw words on weak
As if side bit no use just freak
World rubs wounds and smile
Side bit hard soft bit long mile

Rebuked and pushed side bit
He became savior to save life skit
None came to save his life
He chose to rise from side ripe

King and his men who life give
Remain in side fight till skin seeve
Hold the side of boat to pull net
Slow side roll to fulfil the life bet

Hill rolls side bit with water fall
Mud stones run down side all
You watch the derbis of side bit fall
Save your self hold the breath call


Scheme AXXBB XXCC DDEE AAFX XFGG HHHH
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11 1011111 110111 11011010 1101110010 11001001 011110 1101011 100010111 101111 11111111 11101 1111111 010111 101101111 111111 1111111 1011111 01011111 10111111 11111011 11111101 111111 11011111 1111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 792
Words 166
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 26

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Explains importance of side bit.

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Written on October 28, 2022

Submitted by jay.kas8 on October 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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